Eternal

Pack up the pieces of my heart

Brown leather suitcases apart

Wind blowing changes rattles the bones

Undressed here I stand all alone

 

On this journey what awaits me

Some things they say will never be

You won’t listen foot on the stair

Run away all too hard to bear

 

Then I see your face yet again

In love where we all stand

Grace the siren song of this soul

Beauty here I am here I’m whole

 

There was never just you and I

Love’s forever it does not die

Reviews

[Diamond]

"On this journey what awaits me"

These words, I am sure catch anybody's attention. When we stop and look at things, this is the ultimate reality. Yet, the journey goes on...

[MOON]

Thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

"On this journey what awaits me
Some things they say will never be
You won’t listen foot on the stair
Run away all too hard to bear"

[MOON]

Thanks again Sami

[Cole Hayley]

accidently rated this lower than i wanted.

[MOON]

Thanks for stopping. cole always appreciated.

[Cole Hayley]

I read a poem a little while ago that was very similar to this. It had a very playful verses and then delivered on that great ending couplet. I am glad you have not left MOON.

[Pax]

Ahh, romance and its essence.... suc deeply woven piece my friend... love is eternal they say....

[MOON]

Thanks Pax for stopping by. Keep well dear friend.

[Sheila Kline]

Sigh, so beautifully romantic......the longing is evident, the outcome is hopeful with words that true love never dies! And the image is absolutely perfect with the twisting round the trees.

[MOON]

Thank you , kindly

[Lydia Shutter]

Beautifully romantic write. Filled with longing for one who is no longer with you. Your faith you will meet again is intense. Lovely work. Lydi**

[MOON]

Many thanks , Lydia go well

[Lyn Anderson]

Really well written romantic piece. Lovely rhythm. I feel an angst, over something lost and waiting to be retrieved.

[MOON]

Many thanks , thanks for stopping by.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Outstanding work and those last two lines are so deeply profound.

[MOON]

Thanks you, so appreciative of your time.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Love may sting when cut, the string. Yet memory fadeth not, nor sweet embraces come to naught.

[MOON]

Thank you so much.