You

 

I could dance under a shower of stars

Find you where sky meets the heart

Knowing life began when you rose

 The dawn of promise of a hopeful day

 

Still there are no casual words

That holds the breath of things

That describes the way the soul knows

That the given hour is racing to meet

 

The fire that breaths to life

The hope that swords the strife

Patches the wounds of a heart

 A balm that stills the bitter wind

 

You were the hour that changed all time

You the reason for the quiet ticking beat

Like the rose blooming in splendour

After a freezing winter of chilling bone

 

You are the song forever in tune

That sings endlessly in summer.

 

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Breathtakingly romantic. Terrific imagery.

[MOON]

Thank you, take care

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You are the song forever in tune
That sings endlessly in summer.

Breathtaking romance in those lines! The depth of emotion is splendid. I enjoyed this one. Lydi**

[MOON]

Thank you Lydia for stopping by most appreciated.

[MsJewel]

The images you have created are breathtaking...I love romantic poetry and your poem is stunning.

:) Julie

[MOON]

Thanks Julie, take care

[AYVID N]

Loved is the reason for living and all hope and joy is tethered to it. Love brings color and life into a grey existence...

"The fire that breaths to life

The hope that swords the strife

Patches the wounds of a heart

A balm that stills the bitter wind



You were the hour that changed all time

You the reason for the quiet ticking beat

Like the rose blooming in splendour

After a freezing winter of chilling bone"


I love the way you said it...Thank you for sharing the delightful poem.

[MOON]

Thanks Divya , take care!