You

 

I could dance under a shower of stars

Find you where sky meets the heart

Knowing life began when you rose

 The dawn of promise of a hopeful day

 

Still there are no casual words

That holds the breath of things

That describes the way the soul knows

That the given hour is racing to meet

 

The fire that breaths to life

The hope that swords the strife

Patches the wounds of a heart

 A balm that stills the bitter wind

 

You were the hour that changed all time

You the reason for the quiet ticking beat

Like the rose blooming in splendour

After a freezing winter of chilling bone

 

You are the song forever in tune

That sings endlessly in summer.

 

Reviews

[Nisreen]

What a beautiful piece ...... I like how you placed elements of nature within your admiration for this person :)

[MOON]

Thanks , Nisreen most appreciated.take care.

[The Brazilian Poet]

Beautiful poem, full of great and touching images! Romantic above all! Congratulations!

[MOON]

Thank you for your kind review. Go well

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Very sweet love poem with lots of eloquent metaphors. Nice write.

[MOON]

Thank you so much, take care.

[Valentine]

A very sweet write. Some lines really stand out. Valentine

[MOON]

Thank you take care!

[ANTO]

This is so eloquent MOON
This stanza really hit me the most (in a good way lol)
"Still there are no casual words
That holds the breath of things
That describes the way the soul knows
That the given hour is racing to meet" - recalling as it does my favorite singer/songwriter and her penchant for such lyrical finesse. Your in great company in my mind now.
Thansk you for posting this one MOON
:))

[MOON]

Ha, what a wonderful compliment, you too kind ...

[ANTO]

well deserved MOON, well deserved :)

[MOON]

Thank you, take care!

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Moon I love your deep rich earthy spirit. It shines beautifully in your art :)

[MOON]

Thanks Lynn , likewise, take care!

[An owl on the moon]

I read your words.. so beautiful and free... and know that just one person can completely transform your world.. can make it deeper.. richer... can bring endless joy to light and darkness... Yes! "You were the hour that changed all time." That says it so well!

[MOON]

Thanks Craig always glad to see you stop by. Take care

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of work! If the recipient doesn't know his value after
this message, then WOW! I really enjoyed reading this, great flow
wording and even picture is great, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MOON]

Thank you, take care!

[Tania]

"You are the song forever in tune
That sings endlessly in summer"
Simply beautiful ...
_Beyourself

[MOON]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and gentle words for love.
"You were the hour that changed all time
You the reason for the quiet ticking beat
Like the rose blooming in splendour
After a freezing winter of chilling bone"
The above lines stood out for me. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MOON]

Thank you for your kind words, take care.,

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.