Dad

 

 

There is your love in bloom in my life

I see it Dad your hands your eyes wise

The ocean called me in the grey white

You in my heart never fading light

 

I speak your name to the silent wind

In amazing grace forever I leaned

For a moment I touch you in song

My soul breaks where it should have been strong

 

Memory is the comfort spent hours

The broken pieces in me still flowers

You are the shadow guiding the sun

You whisper destiny can be won

 

I find you in the beauty of time

Crystal clear ringing in golden chime

Shoulders bent to the swaying of life

In harmony delicate with strife

 

Gentle spirit subtle world view

Every remembrance the allure you

 

Reviews

[Renée]

Lovely expressions for your Father, MOON. They are our first love.. ( :

[zunie frost]

really nice way to express your love to your dad.....may be it's gave me an idea of witting something for my parents too ......thanks for sharing such a lovely piece of work !!!!

[MOON]

Thanks Zunie ,parents are precious . Take care will stop by soon.

[zunie frost]

oky !!!!!!!!! welcome

[Satan]

Thanks for sharing this, it's truly beautiful.

[MOON]

Thank you for stopping by ,take care

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Moon I felt this so strongly. The heart's blood flowed so spiritually with sooo much love.

[MOON]

thanks Lynn , hope you well take care.

[ewest1220]

This hits me in a very personal way. I won't go into too many details but I was really impressed on how you instantly sucked me into this one. Thank you for writing this it is very well done.

[MOON]

Thank you for stopping by, hoped it helped. Take care ,will stop by soon.

[linear]

Such lovely sentiments, a great father must be to receive such glowing sentiments as these.

Bravo

[MOON]

Thank you so much, good to hear from you, go well!

[writing mojo]

This is so beautiful. .such a perfect to a ode driving force in your life..excellent spacing and word choice..i can tell it was hard to get this out in the way you did..

[Pax]

wow, speechless on how beautiful this offering piece is... its amazing how your dad taught you well and shines us with your good heart, Moon, my friend... its greaT!

[MOON]

Thank you so much dear friend , love when you visit my page. Take care!

[Pax]

welcome, dear moon, you take care as well...

[Sheila Kline]

Memories of one we cherish inspire us to carry on and preserve the ways taught to us.....lovely words of your dad!

[MOON]

Thank you Sheila most appreciative.

[Beccy]

The love of a father is so very precious. 'Memory is the comfort spent hours.' 'I find you in the beauty of time.'

Those line are spiritually uplifting.


Beccy.

[MOON]

Thank you Beccy for your kind review. Take care!