Mourn

 

 

 

The heart scattered with wings that never flew

And dreams laid waste and happiness too few

The wind lashes and calls in a wash of broken rain

All you grasp in finger loads are hung hours of pain

 

If I could see the moment when it all went wrong

If I could fix and tune the melody and the song

 If the flowering rose stood whole in storms eye

Dreams could weather typhoons and knots untie

 

The world be like the fountains endless spring

Your heart and mine delicately on the wing

And every bare branch burnt and hung out to dry

Would spurt in growth flower and forever fly

 

So when autumn rusts in all its glory appear

You would be at one with courage conquering fear

Yet now it is the darkness creeps and shadows the door

My heart lay bare wasted and broken to the core

 

Now that the angels of mercy from the heart is gone

Here on this bloody cross here lies a life to mourn

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

You own my tears in this moment Moon, such a poignant and bereaved write, tugs at the heart.

[MOON]

Thank you Frieda always look forward to your reviews. Take care my friend , will stop by soon!

[Antonio Valentino]

you can tell this really came from the heart.. so sorry for your loss my friend..

very loving and poignant write

[MOON]

Thanks Antonio , glad to see you around . Take care!

[Antonio Valentino]

you too.. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so sad, but beautifully written...i wonder why there is such beauty in sadness.

jacob

[MOON]

Thanks Jacob for your review.

[Sami Khalil]

We need courage to conquer fears and we need hope to wipe away the tears. Shadows creep like dark clouds and then we are left with a typhoon of emotions...Bravo on this splendid write...:)....................

[MOON]

Thanks Sami, take care!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[Thistle]

Love this! Intensified my rather dull lunch break! ; )

[MOON]

Thank you most appreciated, will stop by soon. Go well!

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Splendid indeed! I very much liked this piece, it flows pensively.
Well penned.

[MOON]

Many Thanks, take care!