Journey

 

 

Look clearly into my eyes tell me what you see

Beyond the cracked mirror to heart that is me

There are my steps in the maroon dance of my life

Do I see the lilac calm after years of strife

 

Tell me at the quiet end of the rainbows arc

Is it where light finds the end of the seamless dark

And then I will tell you of the grace of the soul

Perhaps where once I was broken now I am whole

 

Yes in sorrow there are things to have and to hold

Shards that turned into crystal dreams now just pure gold.

See the fragile warrior charging through this world

All the bitter seeds now in full promise unfurls

 

Look clearly into my eyes tell me what you see

Here is my state this is where I was meant to be

With the sorrow of dark journeys I travelled far

I am both the full crimson sun and the lone star

Reviews

[Cole Hayley]

"I am both the full crimson sun and the lone star" -- that is honestly amazing.

[MOON]

Thank you Cole so much for the review, will stop by soon.

[Lamis]

Amazing, took me to a land of mirrors and lost souls. Loved every bit of it. :)

[MOON]

Thank you Lamees, take care!

[An owl on the moon]

There is a life of light and shadow that flows through us... and here in the misted reflections, your world is made alive for us all.

[zainul]

Your epic piece is a note of inspiration for us all.
You have experienced strife and peace all through your long journey.
You paused to think when a hurdle stood on your way.
You didn't stop there.You fought through the hurdles and now enjoy the calm of lilac.
A wonderful fabulous work.
I felt like passing through a dreamland while reading your piece.
Congratulations,Moon you are a queen of poems!!!

[MOON]

Thanks Zainul for your lovely review. Go well.

[Stella Armour]

beautiful picture and poem go well together, i enjoyed your thoughts that we can have a fulfilled life and yet still be alone, be broken and yet heal...good and bad in everything....

[MOON]

Thanks Stella for your wonderful words!
Take care

[ANTO]

MOON - it is a powerful write and a strong testimony to the strength of the human spirit. You have learned a great deal about yourself, I feel and it is valuable signposting for those still on that road.
You are a gifted writer.
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[MOON]

Thanks Anto for your kind words. Take care!

[Holly Mason]

this reads as if you were reading it aloud ...and that makes it a gifted write
a journey through the soul...with a use of nature and surrounding world...lovely
love your choice of artwork
thank you for sharing

[MOON]

Thank you Holly appreciate your comments.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Thank you for sharing this beautiful journey. Splendid read and write.

[MOON]

Thanks Brandon most appreciated.

[David Scott]

It does seem we find purpose simply by taking a journey. We find not only answered, but we learn the questions as well.
I enjoyed the poem MOON. Thank you for sharing your journeys here.

[MOON]

Many Thanks , take care!

[Rogue]

Beautiful and flowing script here. The rhyme wonderful.
Well written evolution on roles and circumstances that have lead up to the person they now are.

Great work on this. :)

[MOON]

Thank you so much most appreciated.