you do Ricochet quite well, dear poet! i am sure he is flattered. this is a terrific write, and i know , very well, its message. fight the real wars, let the soldiers do the soldiering. well penned!
I like your sardonic style of writing. We are poetic warriors are we not?... wield your pen, dear Moon! We are here to learn, inspire, express thoughts, and release emotions artistically. I say bravo to this! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Quill , thanks for stopping by , this site gets crazy sometimes must be full moon!
11 Years Ago
I bet! I've missed out, sounds crazy around here. lol
I'll tell you in the review. That's what the review is right? However, I don't just flay one alive for mistakes, nor for superiority. I just like to help if I am able. That's all. If I don't like a write, I just don't leave a comment. Seems pointless to if I have nothing positive to say or no encouragement to give. This is also why I do not send RR's and rarely do I respond to those sent me. I do not like being cornered, so to speak to come and comment on a piece I may not normally comment on. We all have off days and write dribble. :)
This was an interesting and very relevant piece. Like a group photo.. That we can eventually spot ourself in. Smiling, scowling, holding up a beer, making bunny ears over another's head, a hand on another's behind.. Etc. :) A moment captured in time of so many different personalities. Like plaids and polka dots when you mix them, they clash. :)
I like this poem a lot for being so frank and relevant to this site and poetry in general. Some people do it in good faith and some do it in arrogance to show they are better thank us or prove a point. I build friendship first and email anyone if I feel they made a typo or something important for their own sake . It is never for my sake. It will be in a seggestive form and a friendly manner...An excellent write...:)
A great write.
It was necessary to document the type of war that breaks out occasionally among the writers.
The world is ruled by generals with their followers.Some writers too like to be called as
'soldiers' .They jump up to capture the imaginary enemies over the ethereal internet
where a force develop on each side.
Moon,congratulate you for the wonderful work!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Zainul for your kind review, most appreciated! Take care!
I tell people. When I'm rich and famous. I will get a fancy pant editor and make my work perfect. Writing is learning and trying to improve. I don't like rewriting. Changes initial desire and form of story. I like the poem. Nice flow of thoughts using short sentences to made your purpose come alive and strong. Today I write for pleasure. I'm poor and I can afford a editor yet. I do appreciate polite help. E-mail is polite if something need to be repaired. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Coyote , always enjoy you stopping by . Take care!