Shine

 

 

Hold the dream it picks you up from the sorrow

Here we are dancing in time trying to clutch

What’s left of today while grasping tomorrow

Love supposed to find us on the edge of time

Rescuing us from falling and crossing lines

It should be the promised panacea so fine

Yet dawn breaks from the onslaught of demon nights

Waking us to remnants of shattered crystal

Still In the fog don’t reach out for the pistol

Hold onto the dream it quiets the horror

 Calms the shrill mind promising an end of shadows

Hold the dream release the terror turn on the lights

Your moment will arrive to splendidly shine

You will leave an imprint you will be defined

Reviews

[Dalia]

There is so much hope in this poem that reached out to me, I enjoyed it really.
well-penned

[MOON]

Thank you kindly!

[Pax]

Your moment will arrive to splendidly shine
You will leave an imprint you will be defined
~ this sentences shines a bright light on my day... so much hope i see in brightly colorful words. This is so beautiful dear Moon, Great!

[Sami Khalil]

Here we are dancing in time trying to clutch

What’s left of day and holding to tomorrow
This is a magical write especially those lines that did it for me and took me to your magical love and nature...:)

[MOON]

Thank you Sami for the lovely comments.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[captain]

so beautiful, the photo seems to match of what is portrayed on your poem. Great!

[MOON]

Thank you!

[kublakhan27]

Simply a work of beauty :)

[MOON]

Many thanks.

[CS]

I like the message here, Moon. There are times in life (and I am pretty sure we have all been there) when we wonder if we have even made a dent. We wonder what we are alive for and if it is even worth it. That is why we must hold those dreams and keep our eyes open for the beauty around us. We all leave our footprints somewhere.

I love the pic, by the way. It is very pretty:)

[MOON]

Yes indeed Courtney we all leave a footprint . Thanks

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This is a beautiful call to arms. Love and even the dream of love can sustain you!..
Strong stuff! Good poem

[MOON]

Thanks, appreciated.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Nice one :) so emotional !

[MOON]

Thank you so much!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome :) but can i ask u something? how u can post a picture in the middle of the poem ? i can't do that !