Shine

Shine

A Poem by MOON

 

 

Hold the dream it picks you up from the sorrow

Here we are dancing in time trying to clutch

What’s left of today while grasping tomorrow

Love supposed to find us on the edge of time

Rescuing us from falling and crossing lines

It should be the promised panacea so fine

Yet dawn breaks from the onslaught of demon nights

Waking us to remnants of shattered crystal

Still In the fog don’t reach out for the pistol

Hold onto the dream it quiets the horror

 Calms the shrill mind promising an end of shadows

Hold the dream release the terror turn on the lights

Your moment will arrive to splendidly shine

You will leave an imprint you will be defined

© 2013 MOON


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with all the love and passion expressed in such a nice way, it is amazing poem really

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thanks Khalid for your kind words.
khalid

11 Years Ago

my pleasure..MOON..
" Love supposed to find us on the edge of time"
now that is a very philosophical, and clear thought. Moon, this whole
Write I could quote, for you being so near to your heartbeat...
Amazing...

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thanks Elisa , I always love your reviews.
Thanks

11 Years Ago

You're most welcome sweetheart, your writing is amazing xx
A beautiful message of hope.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thanks Enid for stopping by and your kind words.
I read this aloud to my 4 year old granddaughter, I do this alot, she said that's a good one.......yes it is!

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thanks that's awfully special I am so glad you read poetry to her!
Thank you for writing this poem. It has given me much hope in a time of despair!
As poetry, this is superbly done. The rhyming is impeccable and effortless and the wording is just beautiful...


Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the gracious review, some days are bad and all we have is hope, hold onto that.. read more
Ayvid N

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
This was an amazing piece. I really thought the picture went beautifully with it. You wrote this really beautifully. Thank you for sharing. :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Angie, take care!
Dreams dance across the page in this read, it's a beautiful compilation of hope. Nicely pen'd Moon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Many thanks Frieda for stopping by most appreciated.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My pleasure, was a lovely read.
It's true. "You will be defined". So keep leaving your footprint.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice writing. I really respond to the imagery your create. Plan on reading much more of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


There is such a brightness here to lift the heart and mind... You don't deny pain.. you help us rise above it...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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