Lost

I looked to find you in the places I know

 in the corners where we used to go

 you were not there you were gone

i remember your eyes at two

 how they lit up at the sight of an open flame

 wide like a brown eyed dawn

now everything is black

 your eyes steel and  stoned

  you are now all Crystal Meth

programmed for a fix

 hurtling always to that desolate high

  raking in all kinds of debts

i looked to find you in the places I know

 in love where the heart grows

 you were not there you were gone

Now when all is said and done

Honey lets make a pact

 I am always open to hear

what  it is in your soul you lack

we looked to find you

in the quiet of our dreams

no Saving of the Souls

every moment we grow old  

knowing you are gone.

Reviews

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Wooooooooow !!! lovely and amazing , its remind me of soledad for westlife
Amazing :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

quite emotional!
liked it :)

[An owl on the moon]

What an aching, deeply moving poem.... your words reach back in time to those beautiful places the heart once knew... So bittersweet...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Trying to save one's soul from a dire outcome is a difficult task...especially when they are wrapped in a (Crystal Meth)web of their own. You have written with compassion and love. Great write!

[MOON]

Thanks Robbie for your kind thoughts! Most appreciated.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's my pleasure, my sweet friend!~xo~:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

dramatic..traumatic and quite fantastic

[MOON]

Many thanks , will be stopping by soon! Take care.

[Dr. Wood ?]

in all this snow...I WILL

[Dream Weaver]

Truly melancholic, The evils of meth or any other
drug for that matter turns loved ones into strangers
in essence the walking dead...Nicely done!

[MOON]

Yes indeed the walking dead... Thank you for stopping by. Take care!

[Dream Weaver]

Quite welcome!

[Relic]

The drugs seem to cry their names when they become addicted like that. It's a shame but it's all too common. Nice writing Moon.

[MOON]

As you say all too common and tragic. Thanks for the review appreciated!

[Relic]

:)

[RachelReaper]

this is so sad... but this was written wonderfully.

[Circe]

tragic sadness..... keep the strength and resilience in your heart.. that is all we can ask.. the words that need to be spoken, heard loud and powerful, as a lesson and a way to spread your love.

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This is a very painful situation that you have written about. It is a shame that ppl will sell themselces short for artificial happiness. My thoughts are with you