Loving You

Days I remember cold in the summer heat

There was my heart body and soul there to bleed

All the dreams I desired slipped through my hand

Whipped by bone emotion I could barely stand

 

One day when hope was all but gone you were there

Standing tall catching my fall I could not care

A blink of an eye all anguish washed away

It seemed that night was suddenly turned to day

 

Now I hold you in my being soft summer rain

You cleansed wounds and disinfected my pain

You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes

I could touch the lustrous sky and find new heights

 

Now I sit in splendour I could not go back

You pointed the track there is nothing I lack

In me all the golden dreams I sought in you

In homage captured heart you altered my view

Reviews

[kelvin]

Nice read here to the point of wholesome love, for this is a powerful emotional feeling. It can break us down or lift us up, but yet you show the wonderful, pure, soft side of love is all worth having in life. nice read as always keep writing fellow writer.

[David Scott]

A love poem aged a ripe. Ready for the pour and opens well spoken into the air.
I was glad for the sip of this fine wine.

[An owl on the moon]

You inspire the heart and mind to realize how one life can completely transform another... There is surely more to each of us than we can possibly imagine.

[CS]

What an amazing tribute to love, dear friend. It is so rare we find these kinds of birds. They bring inspiration and a new perception. They cleanse all the hurt so that you can see happiness clearly. What a beautiful sentinment.

[MOON]

Thanks for stopping by and the lovely insights.

[MOON]

How tenderly it is through true love getting lost in the
Warm summer nights, and not realizing that the
Day arrived. Dwelling in that pure seratonin.
I thought it was a wonderful walk
By your thoughts Moon. An amalgamation
with a loved one if two hearts become one soul.
Beautiful poetry.

E.L.

[MOON]

Thank you Eli , lovely review.

You're welcome dear poetess.
Your write was a jewel.

[Quill~]

I love the rhythm of this piece, as I read it. You have painted a beautiful picture in my mind. "soft summer rain"- I love that. Outstanding work.

[MOON]

Thank you Quill, most appreciated. Take care

[Quill~]

I love your writing...it's beautiful.

[MOON]

Thank you so much!

[Quill~]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

A very passionate , beautifully rhyming poem full of heartfelt emotions that captures hearts and serenades ears . You are touching the sky indeed Moon in your latest ones and reaching heights beyond our imaginations...:)

[MOON]

Thanks , you too kind!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[captain]

passionate write that speak the soul of the poet.
wonderful work moon!

[MOON]

Thank you for the lovely review

[captain]

your most welcome!

[Tree]

In reverence of someone special, no doubt. Wonderfully expressed with heart/ with passion. I hope this person has an opportunity to read this... Thank you, for sharing

DPaz

[MOON]

Many thanks, appreciated