Loving You

Days I remember cold in the summer heat

There was my heart body and soul there to bleed

All the dreams I desired slipped through my hand

Whipped by bone emotion I could barely stand

 

One day when hope was all but gone you were there

Standing tall catching my fall I could not care

A blink of an eye all anguish washed away

It seemed that night was suddenly turned to day

 

Now I hold you in my being soft summer rain

You cleansed wounds and disinfected my pain

You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes

I could touch the lustrous sky and find new heights

 

Now I sit in splendour I could not go back

You pointed the track there is nothing I lack

In me all the golden dreams I sought in you

In homage captured heart you altered my view

Reviews

[Circe]

a really soulful and bright piece of learning through love..... you bring a lot of light and hope with your words... there is a sweetness and a grateful heart... how people can heal each other... this is inspiration and transcendent beauty.

[AYVID N]

Love lights up everything
Takes to new heights
Life changes from dark to bright

This poem is as beautiful as love itself!

[Kaylor Mason]

This was truly, simply, inspiringly, divinely, superbly beautiful. No, gorgeous. Exquisite. No, that's not quite a good enough word either. I can't think of a word to suit--it's that good

[MOON]

Thanks for the beautiful review , much appreciated!

[Michael G.]

Lovely.

[MOON]

Many thanks Michael!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Quite the write. Love the flow and rhyme here. The third stanza is probably my favorite.

[J]

beautifully descriptive of the power of love. nicely done.

[linear]

Such sweet rapture ....

[krish]

nice....................................................

[Kal]

Very deep..
I specifically loved this part

Now I hold you in my being soft summer rain
You cleansed wounds and disinfected my pain
You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes
I could touch the lustrous sky and find new heights

Keep it up!

[Frieda P]

I love this read, it could be about anything or anyone really, it never insinuates. It could be a lover or an intense high from heroin, it allows the reader to follow the flow but never dictates where to go. Nice one....love it.

[MOON]

Ha , ha Frieda you crack me up ! High as a kite. Thanks you made my day , it is night here though!

[Frieda P]

ha you are confused! ;-)

[MOON]

Thanks , take care love your reviews!

[Frieda P]

Welcome, my pleasure!