Loving You

Days I remember cold in the summer heat

There was my heart body and soul there to bleed

All the dreams I desired slipped through my hand

Whipped by bone emotion I could barely stand

 

One day when hope was all but gone you were there

Standing tall catching my fall I could not care

A blink of an eye all anguish washed away

It seemed that night was suddenly turned to day

 

Now I hold you in my being soft summer rain

You cleansed wounds and disinfected my pain

You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes

I could touch the lustrous sky and find new heights

 

Now I sit in splendour I could not go back

You pointed the track there is nothing I lack

In me all the golden dreams I sought in you

In homage captured heart you altered my view

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

aw.. that is lovely..a perfect tribute to your love..

[MOON]

Thanks for stopping by!

[Saumya]

this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo bwautiful.....!!!!!
the loveliest poem ,i could ever read....!!!
very very very well done....
with best wishes,
saumya

[MOON]

Thanks Saumya for your generous review. Regards!

[Saumya]

oh..III you are highly welcomed..!!!
take care,
saumya

[MOON]

Thanks Khalid most appreciated .

[khalid]

very nice flow, very sweet images, very clever words picking, from all aspects, very enjoying to read..

[Yellow Butterfly]

Such an enchanting poem...... which I adored reading as much as I adored the imagery that went with it.


A moving and endearing write.... :O)

[MOON]

Thanks for the review, most appreciated.
Take care

[quinfinn]

a truly wonderful piece of prose on discovery and embellishment of those deep feelings which are love.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very fine piece of poetry I must say...
great :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

beautiful picture!

"You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes"

is my favorite line

[MOON]

Many thanks! Take care!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're welcome; you too ;)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a meaningful tribute....I enjoyed, thanks