Loving You

Loving You

A Poem by MOON

Days I remember cold in the summer heat

There was my heart body and soul there to bleed

All the dreams I desired slipped through my hand

Whipped by bone emotion I could barely stand

 

One day when hope was all but gone you were there

Standing tall catching my fall I could not care

A blink of an eye all anguish washed away

It seemed that night was suddenly turned to day

 

Now I hold you in my being soft summer rain

You cleansed wounds and disinfected my pain

You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes

I could touch the lustrous sky and find new heights

 

Now I sit in splendour I could not go back

You pointed the track there is nothing I lack

In me all the golden dreams I sought in you

In homage captured heart you altered my view

© 2013 MOON


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aw.. that is lovely..a perfect tribute to your love..

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by!
this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo bwautiful.....!!!!!
the loveliest poem ,i could ever read....!!!
very very very well done....
with best wishes,
saumya

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thanks Saumya for your generous review. Regards!
Saumya

11 Years Ago

oh..III you are highly welcomed..!!!
take care,
saumya
Thanks Khalid most appreciated .

Posted 11 Years Ago


very nice flow, very sweet images, very clever words picking, from all aspects, very enjoying to read..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such an enchanting poem...... which I adored reading as much as I adored the imagery that went with it.


A moving and endearing write.... :O)

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, most appreciated.
Take care
a truly wonderful piece of prose on discovery and embellishment of those deep feelings which are love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very fine piece of poetry I must say...
great :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


beautiful picture!

"You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes"

is my favorite line

Posted 11 Years Ago


MOON

11 Years Ago

Many thanks! Take care!
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

11 Years Ago

you're welcome; you too ;)
a meaningful tribute....I enjoyed, thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago



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