2013

 

 

Let my ship sail out to sea

Find my compass let me be

The step in your heart always

The song in your dance all days

 

Find me the ink write the word

Let everyone’s voice be heard

Still the drumbeat of all war

Tell me what guns are there for

 

Hear the children’s cries at night

All that’s inhumane take flight

See dreams of a lit sky

See me and tell me just why

 

All colours are a delight

There is no black and white

God in everyone don’t fear

Justice finds us this New Year

Reviews

[Michael G.]

A loving, hopeful expression of wishful dreams and desires. I hope your thoughts come true for all of us. Wonderful flow and such a quiet feel to this wonderful poem.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

A beautiful prayer for the year. May all of your dreams be realized.
I loved the lyrical feel of this poem. Full of heart. I enjoyed it a lot.
Very touching work.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Straightforward, not a word minced.

[quinfinn]

fabulous write! i do hope that this new year will bring a new age of enlightnement to mankind. your words are universal and heartfelt!

[MOON]

Many thanks
Take care!

[spiritwind]

Moon!!! Absolutely top notch in poetic delivery, in meaning, in presentation. Each stanza bears beautiful meaningful lines. Excellent!!

[MOON]

Thank you most appreciated!

[krish]

NICE.....WELL WRITTEN....

[AWickedMoon]

Beautiful, I hope that this year the world can find peace.

[Jon Roggie]

Nice. Curious, where do you call home? Different areas lead to different sayings. Adds to the mix!

[Zainab UF]

Indeed, let's raise our voices against the injustices that prevail in the world and hope that the inhumane (or at least, some of it) will take flight. Illuminating, beautiful and meaningful poem.

Have a peaceful, happy new year!

[Tex]

very nice... thank you for this.