2013

 

 

Let my ship sail out to sea

Find my compass let me be

The step in your heart always

The song in your dance all days

 

Find me the ink write the word

Let everyone’s voice be heard

Still the drumbeat of all war

Tell me what guns are there for

 

Hear the children’s cries at night

All that’s inhumane take flight

See dreams of a lit sky

See me and tell me just why

 

All colours are a delight

There is no black and white

God in everyone don’t fear

Justice finds us this New Year

Reviews

[iliOZ]

just want to make a point (and i agree with Michael G.) this piece is a beautiful prayer
i am a cancer and you are my moon

[iliOZ]

amen

[MOON]

Thank you, most appreciated. Take care!

[Holly Mason]

love the thought of you writing this while looking into your new year and what it should bring
all that's humane take flight- great line...I will supply the wings (if needed)*)
almost six months into this year now...hopefully mankind picks the pace up a bit
thank you for sharing enjoyed

[MOON]

Time has flown and I seriously doubt we will get closer. Thanks for the review of this write. Take care!

[Stacey Watts]

I like the flow of this as well. This was a captivating piece. You are great with imagery here and your words truly capture our world with hope and promise.

[MOON]

Thank you!

[Zahra]

Enjoyed reading this. Beautifully done with nice flow.

[MOON]

Thank you so much!

[KurKota]

I really like this writing also. You are a gifted wordsmith, in my opinion. Very nice message.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

such a hopeful gesture and appropiately keen to discard all that we don't want for 2013, thanks

[Wretched Knight]

Lets hope! Great poem!

[MOON]

Thank you ! take care

[London Poet]

This is a real treasure, I love how you have expressed your wishes so tenderly in this poem.