Aisle of Sorrow

 

See all time rushing away

Grant me a second without grey

When the stars shine at night

Fool me into thinking all is right

 

Then on a bright full moon

Lance the wound

With sorrows heaped on pain

Let me hang my head in shame

 

For the bell when it pealed was for me

Life will never again be

The love filled with style

The moment we waltzed in the aisle

 

Reviews

[zainul]

Wonderful rhymed piece.
It is a pleasure to remember the enjoyable moments of life.
Added to reading and favorite lists.
100/100

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

there is a time for everything is there not? Somedays are diamonds some are coal......thank goodness we have the good memories to sustain us. Well done Moon.

[Emerald Seas]

Beautifully expressed sadness. Such a loss of love and possibilities. It is almost unfathomable to comprehend. Well done!

[Tree]

A poem of profound sadness; the last song for the last dance. A poem of departure, that was well written, and keenly felt

[FJ Davis]

The death of love--or the death of love's illusion?
Either way, tragic.
Excellent, Moon!

[CS]

What I like about this most, Moon, is that you captured a moment like a photograph. There is this feeling like time is standing still. I get the sensation that this moment is like a fairy tale. As if there was so much pain, you just wanted to see something beautiful for a second in time, whether it was an illusion or not.
I very much enjoyed reading, my friend :)