Cold fact

Cold fact

A Poem by MOON

The wind in the trees are rustling

 Kismet’s alchemy a magic wand

The sky meets the rising ocean

A waltz anticipating no end

 

For far too long no applause no roses and wine

You were the open secret seemingly lost in time

 

Destiny found you my darling

Karma played its  visible hand

Some songs are poetry in motion

Yours was one of those my friend

 

© 2013 MOON


Author's Note

MOON
Please copy this link and read this amazing story, listen to the music its pure poetry.
http://thequietus.com/articles/09726-rodriguez-searching-for-sugarman

Searching for Sugar Man: Sixto Rodriguez, absent winner of the Oscars
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When the movie Searching for Sugar Man won the best documentary Oscar, it was not just a win for the filmmakers and for the subject of the film, Sixto Rodriguez; it was a win for art and poetry everywhere.......
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The first stanza is killer, so is the whole poem for that matter. I love its length, its short but just enough to really stupify.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beautiful. You are a great writer.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this must be one of the most imaginatively beautiful I've heard in a long time. There are some people on here who really stand out, and yes, I'm pointing to you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A richly woven tapestry of thought spanning across time's yielded world. Each line is a brilliant thread that pulls the profound beauty together and gives Destiny its sweet destination...

Posted 12 Years Ago


A lightly written piece with depth and feeling.

"For far too long no applause no roses and wine
You were the open secret seemingly lost in time"

Great lines!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loving this poem, lovely use of language with beautiful metaphors!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Rodriguez is too cool for school! And this is a wonderful tribute to him and his music, I love the last two lines
"Some songs are poetry in motion
Yours was one of those my friend"
Moon are you from South Africa, also?!

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a whimsical piece... I loved the rhythmic flow... and the last stanza is so lovely!... As a whole this is enchanting!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked the poem.
I loved how you presented the poem.
To me, that's fundamental.

It was a good read.
Thanks for sharing.


Posted 12 Years Ago


A very enchanting poem full of beautiful imagery and meanings.
A tribute to Sugarman.
I like the lines:
You were the open secret
seemingly lost in time.
Awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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