Cold fact

Cold fact

A Poem by MOON

The wind in the trees are rustling

 Kismet’s alchemy a magic wand

The sky meets the rising ocean

A waltz anticipating no end

 

For far too long no applause no roses and wine

You were the open secret seemingly lost in time

 

Destiny found you my darling

Karma played its  visible hand

Some songs are poetry in motion

Yours was one of those my friend

 

© 2013 MOON


Author's Note

MOON
Please copy this link and read this amazing story, listen to the music its pure poetry.
http://thequietus.com/articles/09726-rodriguez-searching-for-sugarman

Searching for Sugar Man: Sixto Rodriguez, absent winner of the Oscars
Posted on February 25, 2013 By Phillippe Diederich Movies

When the movie Searching for Sugar Man won the best documentary Oscar, it was not just a win for the filmmakers and for the subject of the film, Sixto Rodriguez; it was a win for art and poetry everywhere.......
http://www.voxxi.com/searching-for-sugar-man-sixto-rodriguez/

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What a beautiful tribute! I followed the link and read the article - that IS an amazing story...thank you for leading me there. It makes me think about so many things...our lives, our stories, our poetry...and touches me on many levels.

Posted 12 Years Ago


lovely description!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I have listened to his songs on youtube. They are awesome. Thank you for sharing dear Moon.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely write Moon!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Great job, Moon. I live the vivid imagery.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The first line: The wind in the trees are rustling throws me off grammatically. I really enjoy the rest though, so, I'll just leave that little nitpick for you.

Great use of varying line lengths.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent tribute, Moon--so smartly styled!

Posted 12 Years Ago


First line , something not quite right there .. :) ..
(For) Far to long .. might take away the FOR ..

The rest flows beautifully .. Just wondering who the "YOU" is .. ..

Jazz

Posted 12 Years Ago


A timeless piece!
Beautifully rendered, really enjoyed love
xox

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love the connective nature in this piece, time, scenery , and passion, very surreal yet concrete as you have depicted the image so well placed in the loner roads of this friend ship journey...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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