Puppet On A String

He played me like a violin a puppet on a string

He told me his heart was only mine love would only bring

Golden warm sunsets and a pair of birds on the wing

Crimson dawns and church bells ours was more than a fling  

So I swayed to the music then I felt the bee sting

Love was an uncut diamond and I would to it cling

 Whispering sweet words in the night he spoke like a king

In the white morn like a joker arrows he would sling

He played me like a violin a puppet on a string

He made a bitter meal of everything I would bring

He shattered me like glass and broke the fine wedding ring

 Then he left took a joyride with someone on a swing

He played her like a violin a puppet on a string

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Oh my god, I love this! I know it's sad, but for some reason, it cheered me up a lot. It's so rhythmic, I think it would make a good song. Like Drive By by Train-with sensitive lyrics, but an upbeat tune to it

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i really like this one, its all about feeling manipulated and trying to resolve the tricky issue of splitting up and dissolusion...very good

[Eve]

There is no shame in loving someone, if he moved on and he treated you badly, then he was only a learning stone on which to step to higher ground :)

[Cole Hayley]

Crimson dawns and church bells ours was more than a fling

- I love that line and the poem. Constant rhymes work so well here

[Shubham's View]

Oh! Aren't we all puppets on someone's string?
I like the extent of the use of rhyme, and ofcourse you ridiculing (I guess) the incident and the person!

[lost girl]

oh! so you have met my ex(s) eh? LOL so sad when they can't see past themselves. so sad to be sad...but SO good when their gone and buried in the trunk under the rest of the junk in the spare closet! LIVE ON!!! BREATHE DEEP!! LOVE MORE! great piece!

[Antonio Valentino]

his lose my friend..

next time try and find someone with, no strings attached

great piece

:)

[G!o]

Sad...really sad. You've put it in quite a lovely tune of words that really embraces the heart all through while i read it. This beautiful and i really enjoyed woefully. The sadness of betrayal. Amazing writing as always MOON...

[linear]

So many do, be careful of the maestro of the humming chords, for they so often weave a fantasy.......enjoyed :O)

[Heromen Selena]

This is good. I love the analogy of the puppet and the violin together.