Time

Love take me home let my heart unlock

I saw it written on the clock

Time moves even in the stillness

Time moves without a second hand shown

There is the boat anchored in the dock

Swaying to the side in the  shrillness

The wolf baying lonely on its own

Nothings ever carved in rock

Time moves even in the stillness

Time moves without a second hand shown

Will the unseen

Come and take me home

I saw it written on the clock

Time moves even in the stillness

Time moves without a second hand shown

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Deep and a little mysterious as well...nice work :)

[Sami Khalil]

Nice lovely poem ... I love the line:
Time moves even in the stillness...

[Southern Cross]

Just the thoughts I was contemplating today..the slow yet fast movement of time " Time moves even in the stillness" .. perfect line

That's all the beauty of Time, Moon. Wonderfully captured, and felt...
Your words are timeless.

Thank you,

E.L.

[~]

Moon, I can tell you much I adore the repetition in this....so fitting....as though the words are moving around and around with the count of time. That is so clever. "Time moves without a second hand shown"...that line has a depth to it that makes me sit and wonder. There is a definite cyclical nature to existence, I can see that in your words. It seems to move in circles much of the time, to experience all we can from the moment, before it passes. One of my favorites of yours for sure. Great work on this, dear friend.

[An owl on the moon]

How your words made me think of my own life... time passing me by, or pushing me on perhaps... You speak deeply of the world that never quite sits still... or silent...