Darling

Darling

A Poem by MOON

Colours blend take on a different hue

Standing on a hill with a jaundiced view

I remember you were like morning dew

A dancer on stage an actor on cue

Tossing of a coin all shiny and new

A graceful eagle wingspan as it flew

 

So why was it that my love never grew

Darling I knew, you too good to be true

 

© 2012 MOON


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I love this! Your words flow wonderfully!...It has a heartbeat of it's own! Excellent write...fantastic rhythmic flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


yeah. The rhyming was catch... Nice work...

Posted 12 Years Ago


There is a nice peace in this, not sure how to explain it. But it is there, minor cosmetic edits, but peaceful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great rhyme... the flow was amazing..

Posted 12 Years Ago


short and very sweet I think...It would be awful to actually be too good to be true.
Good stuff

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww. Delightful rhymes & a wistful wish the love worked out true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how every line rhymes, and yet it isn't overbearing like some poems can be that rhyme. You did an excellent job with poem. I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Darling I knew, you were too good to be true...........lovely!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful, surreal, and so passionaite. I loved the ending

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've read much of your stuff, but rather than inundate you with comments like "great poem" (there isn't much else I can add to the reviews you've already received) I'll just say here that I love your poetry and you're one of my favourite writers on the site...it ebbs and flows and rhymes and does all those things gorgeously in sync :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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