Darling

Colours blend take on a different hue

Standing on a hill with a jaundiced view

I remember you were like morning dew

A dancer on stage an actor on cue

Tossing of a coin all shiny and new

A graceful eagle wingspan as it flew

 

So why was it that my love never grew

Darling I knew, you too good to be true

 

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this! Your words flow wonderfully!...It has a heartbeat of it's own! Excellent write...fantastic rhythmic flow.

[Fréyjä Helv..]

yeah. The rhyming was catch... Nice work...

[MoriartyMesa]

There is a nice peace in this, not sure how to explain it. But it is there, minor cosmetic edits, but peaceful.

[Maya Storm]

Great rhyme... the flow was amazing..

[Dr. Wood ?]

short and very sweet I think...It would be awful to actually be too good to be true.
Good stuff

[Pax Analog]

Awww. Delightful rhymes & a wistful wish the love worked out true.

[Aella.lives]

I love how every line rhymes, and yet it isn't overbearing like some poems can be that rhyme. You did an excellent job with poem. I love it!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Darling I knew, you were too good to be true...........lovely!

[Cole Hayley]

Beautiful, surreal, and so passionaite. I loved the ending

[kublakhan27]

I've read much of your stuff, but rather than inundate you with comments like "great poem" (there isn't much else I can add to the reviews you've already received) I'll just say here that I love your poetry and you're one of my favourite writers on the site...it ebbs and flows and rhymes and does all those things gorgeously in sync :)