Pearls

Pearls of life lying on the ocean floor

winds of change and tears that from my eyes fall

 say you love me when the savage  wind calls

wake me from the sorrow of ice cold shores

 

dreaming  I have walked with you at my side

waltzing in time holding touching the sky

sometimes a fall  yet we would always glide

Beyond the grey misery we would fly  

 

dwelling in paradise adorned with gems

 stone worn by  kings blunting a poison pen

The past is gone and the future is when

we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then

 

life will find us on the dark ocean floor

life will find us bringing us to the shore

Reviews

The pearls of life, meanwhile pearl through the many years on the deep and darken seabed, But the end is in sight ... There are miracles ... I feel the positivity in your ending, beautiful moon. The structure too. It has a special touch...

Lovely.

E.L.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

The past is gone and the future is when we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then.....magnificent write.

[Tai Ryens]

Wonderful imagery embedded in your marvelous phrases. I applaud the third stanza, I love that the most.

[Dean]

Beautifully expressed--the kind of love to be sought--always.

[paul]

ahh, to 'glide' ... beautiful write

[Sami Khalil]

All beautiful write.
I love so many lines especially:
say you love me when the savage wind calls. Wow

[Marie]

Lif is as lovely as pearls...

I would have written the last line as: "Life will find and bring us to the shore."

[Pradnya]

i loved the poem but this two last lines are just amazing, i loved it, i also liked the rhyming, fabuloussssssssssss

[Serenity Faith]

I LOVED the imagery in this piece! You have a knack for analogies as well. It gave me a feeling of being swept out of our darkest times and into a happier light. Or when we travel through past, present, and future trying to find our true placement in life. At least that's what comes to mind for me. Very elegant.

[Nautili]

Lovely structure to this piece: this poem is a pearl. I think you have discovered that beautiful treasures are often fashioned in the dark...

[MOON]

Surreal imagery at its best and wonderfully penned as well ..

[MOON]

Thank you , most appreciated .