Little Brother

Little Brother

A Poem by Monster

My brother.

That is a pest you never want occupying your home.

                It's like a bug that gets into everything,

                           it's like a mouse that destroys your furniture,

     it's like a dog that breaks the things you buy to occupy it,

                    it's like a weasel that takes and hides your belongings.

And yet.....

it has its perks.

A brother is someone that you love

and loves you

even if neither one of you realize it.

Someone that you can be proud of.

Someone that you can take care of

even if you never really want to.

Someone to occasionally take the blame.

Someone to live and make new memories with.

 

A brother,

MY brother

is one of a kind

and I wouldn't trade him for the world.

 

 

..Although sometimes I would trade him for a million bucks.

© 2012 Monster


Author's Note

Monster
This is something that kind of just came to me. My brother just got into trouble, so that served as my point of inspiration and he's five...so a pest is relatively a good title for him. ;)

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Being the oldest sibling I can relate to this piece. " like a weasel that takes and hides your belongings." so very true! Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Monster

12 Years Ago

Thank you, very much! :)
This is quite amazing, I really enjoyed this write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Monster

12 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
This is good. I would add some punctuation though. I would also change the title. I just don't think that the title is right for this piece.
Good job, and keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melody

12 Years Ago

Always.
Monster

12 Years Ago

:D I can only imagine why....?
Melody

12 Years Ago

Me too. Lol

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