The beauty of sleep

As darkness creeps in
to take its hold
The place you've been
at night beholds
for you a comfort

a time to replenish your mind
a place where ideas distort
when you gain what you secretly try to find.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Lovely..........very well thought out and wonderfully penned

[ScottWinchester]

My eyes are a little heavy even as I read this, so I totally get the feeling lol. Lovely job.

I like to offer advice wherever I get the opportunity. That isn't to say you need it, but when it comes to the creative arts we could always improve, right? I'll suggest to you what my university professors suggested to me: read as much as you can and read it aloud. My personal suggestion is Christina Rossetti; let her words roll off your tongue, catch the way she times her breaths, her choice of words, her skill with alliteration. She's a gifted poet.

Best of magic, Monster ;)

- SW

[Melody]

:O I like it....Good job! :D