Comparison

Another written in 2009. About this guy I liked liking my ex-best friend

Laying here I realize,
he'll never see me like he saw her in his eyes.

Such a fool to think a thing,
I clearly must be insane.

To have hoped that I could compare,
to what he once had back there.

So I guess what i'm receiving is pure pitying,
no love, no care, no other feeling.

To wrapped up in my on selfishness,
I couldn't see what was so obviously witnessed.

I ignored all signs to reach what I so dearly prized,
Now that I have him he could never truly be mine is what i realized.

It hurts to say,
but eventually we'll have to walk away.

I could never replace what he truly wants,
the image of him leaving haunts.

But maybe we will meet again,
and a new chapter can begin.

Reviews

[The Verse: A Poetry Jou..]

from a young perspective, yet so bold and mighty. How old are you? your writing is very well structured. very impressed.

[Grey]

I was 14 when I wrote this

[The Verse: A Poetry Journal]

Wow, very nice, what I would have given to write in this manner at 14.

[Grey]

Thank you!