My Wondrous Place

Two minute daily writing

There are many of places in the world

that are so beautiful.

The sky blue oceans of California

The deep, historical roots of Rome,

and the industrious Tokyo of Japan.

There are many more places where I want to be,

that are so beautiful.

The Lush islands of Rio,

The bright, night life of Paris,

and the Iguazu falls of South America.

But of all these places, 

if there was one spot I could always be

It would be when you're beside me.

There are many places in the world

that I have seen.

There are many more places 

where I want to be.

But you made me truly see

My Wondrous Place

Reviews

[Angelo Kingston]

The flow of this caught me off guard. At first I thought you were just speaking about getting away from it all, but in the end you're talking about a person. When I said it caught me off guard I didn't mean in a bad way, I meant in a good way. I liked this, it's a nice, warm and open poem.