Emotions (2004)

Emotions (2004)

A Poem by MC Blodeuwedd

Love
Like chains
en-captures me
to make me
slave

 

Hate
like fire
motivates me
and makes me
fight

 

Emptiness
like void
handicaps me
to give me
rest

 

Cruelty
like death
turns of emotions
to make me
B***h

 

Kindness
like rain
hinders me
to make me
Gone


And so
Where do I turn
What do I become
- BALANCE -

© 2011 MC Blodeuwedd


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This poem makes absolutely no sense to the title of the poem. This is actually a pretty horrible poem as well. I would definitely rewrite a lot of this poem. The structure isn't bad if you could establish a better rhyme though out. I would search within you for your most powerful emotions, and write about poetry that is fueled by your own personal experiences. Try writing your poems in a notebook, and rework them until they seem great. They publish them on here. Also I would work on the grammar on your poem as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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MC Blodeuwedd
MC Blodeuwedd

Kansas City, MO



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Most of my material is very old. Most of my writing comes from distraught. Only extreme emotion can really bring out my best poetry. I am trying to write more short stories now but even then I have t.. more..

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