I can't

Still can't get over her!!!

They tell me to stay away
go away, to never go back
but i can't
They tell me to forget
To leave it alone
to let time heal
But i can't
This feeling deep down burns
All i want to do is die
Can't stand the thought of you
They tell me to live
But i can't

Author's Note

She is still stuck in my head and she won't get out. It's been even tougher over the past two days

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Aww, this is sad and I can really relate to it too! I've been in the position when people say to move on, when it feels both physically and emotionally impossible. It does burn inside. Great write on your personal feelings that you expressed very well!:)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[MoriartyMesa]

This kind of reminded me of The Doors, the wording is very lyrical and could turn into a nice acid rock sort of piece.

[Serena]

:( really sad, but really good poem

[PaperLife]

I know this feeling, whether reffering to a love or other people...

It's short but has emotion. You painted an empty sky so vividly each brush stroke spoke a whole novel. This is great.

[Serena]

; n ; aw...i feel the pain
nicely writen

[No name]

Another nicely written poem, truly expressed your heart and thoughts.

[Ariana]

wow is wonderful i relate alot to what your try to say
this poem has many different meanings
nice job

[SugarlessGiRL]

I can relate to this~ you portrayed a very deep and crazed emotion of longing in a very simple way~ it's nicely put together and nicely written~ I likes it. Good write~ =)

[Abbie]

that sucks highschool relationships endup in heart break 90% of the time great write nice emotion

[SarahCortland]

im very sorry for whatever is or was going on. In highschool relationships are especially hard as im sure you know. They never seem to go as planed and as much as some adults would love to think otherwise they are not easier to get over. But im a junior too and have experienced hurtful relationships so i feel for ya. Anyway great poem way to go on expressing emotion. A lot of the greatest poems are from an emotion we have felt so 100/100 on this one too! :)