Hurt

ITS A TRY

I try so hard not to flirt

So many girls i don't wanna hurt

Some say what i do is an art

It's so easy to break a heart

Reviews

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

hahaha i think they dont actually get what you are trying to say with this poem..
I personally like it. :P
I think they are thinking that you are say you aren't trying to hurt girls at all and that you dont want to and that girls are very sensitive and such...
There are alot of things you could take from this poem :P
I took this you are a heartbreaker :P

[Cody Wiggins]

This poem was not meant to be sweet. Yet almost every girl that has looked at this poem says its sweet. I don't understand why is it so sweet. Is it necessarily because i understand the problem or is it sweet because i am telling you about it it. What about this poem really makes me a sensitive guy?

[Apathy To Empathy]

I agree with Simply Rebekah. Women are fragile, like our insides are crystal glass, glinting in beauty, but so, so fragile.
In the end this was stilla great poem.

[Calypso]

Very true, but you might one day find a girl you really like.

[Hello, Elle]

I respect this a lot. I like how you wrote it in first person, too. Good job.

[LostinKristina]

it short and simple.
but that's what makes this piece great.
you were honest, and that's what draws me to this.

great job.

[~ Otto Girl ~]

wow this is true nice work. Keep writing.

[SarahCortland]

wow i like it! I am a girl and can say we do get hurt lol. However this reminds me of a player and the way a guys mind works. Goodnjob lol

[<3 Simply Rebekah <3]

yeah girls are fragile beings, always gotta be careful,
but if your honest with them and do things face to face,
chances are you'll be better off,
and anyways dating is stupid till college in my mind at least,
when you might truley understand being in a relationship...
nice poem man!