How can this be?

Finally getting to the other side. I heard a familiar voice. Then I felt a familiar warm hug. The light finally out of my eyes i could see Valerie. How could this be though i was dead. I asked what was up. She explained how the men had taken me, my parents had followed their orders and done what they had said. How the men had immediately let me go. Was it all just a dream then. Weeks went by and life could not be any better. I had my life back. It was a dream. It ad to be. Nothing was stopping from taking advantage of my second chance. I spent everyday outside with my girlfriend or having fun with friend and family. I loved having a second chance, but there was something pulling at me. How could this be? The things i did felt so real. I just didn't know what to do. Then something happened. A real bright light came over my eyes. I rubbed my eyes and it left, but then it came back. I walked again and there it was the answer. I was dead. It was the test one that i haven't finished yet. Before me was God. I couldn't believe it. God standing right in front of me. I knelt before him for respect reasons. He had a question to ask. I had a choice. I could chose temptation and go back to Earth it would be like nothing happened or i could chose Heaven. The good and easy life. I really had to think hard. I wanted to go back. I wanted to have life with me. I wanted to be with Valerie to help her with life. To keep her safe from everything. But i didn't want to give up the chance to go to Heaven. I mean thats the best place to be. I chose heaven. I decided that my life on Earth was over. There is no magic or power that could change that. It was the right chose. He moved to the side and i saw gates. Beautiful gates made of pure gold. It was amazing. I looked around and found a familiar face. It was the man that had helped me to get to where i am. I wondered how he got there. He didn't pass the test. He told me he did. My test was to kill and win. His test was to help a scared person find courage and pass the level. He was waiting for me. We spent our time in Heaven helping fellow testers and doing our own little test just for fun. In the back of my head i think back to Earth. You could say that i chose the wrong thing.................. but i wouldn't.

Reviews

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow that would be very hard to pick, I don't think I could do it. You a a very good writer keep up the great work.

[Luna Northstar]

Awwwww!!! I don't know what I would chose.... I don't think I couldn leave my earth life behind... but once your life is over... its over. I really really loved this! well done :)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

speechless........ great book, love it. for it being your first book , it is fantabulous!!! keep on writin!!!!

[Bexfinch]

BRAVO great ending this was a good story