My first kiss

I just can't wait

For my first kiss

I pray to God

I don't miss

I don't really know

How to lean in

So that this 

Kiss may begin

All i ask is

That you don't fus

Cuz our first kiss 

Is on the bus

Author's Note

Still working on it would like some help.
I wrote this right after kissing my girlfriend last friday

Reviews

[Laura Yida <3]

lol this is cute!

[Roxie Demonia]

i like it you did a good job i could never right some thing like this.

[Dom]

I really liked this. It was sweet. Great job :)

[Zana]

kool i like this one.....explain how it felt or something when you kissed her

[Call me Jane]

k well not trying to be a downer but this poem was a bit grade school.
your poems dont need to rhyme to be good.
but thought that this was sweet im glad you kissed her and wrote a poem about it....

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

This is quite cute. I like the way you rhyme it.

[Bexfinch]

well iits nice but why not stat how you feel like maybe ecstatic ,elated or irate or even better this is a really rhymey ( rhymey is not a word haha) poem and it flows well too . But i allways suggest use your five senses when you write.I look forward to seeing more of your writing ----------PEACE
^----^ @( ^------^ )@

[Holly-Marie]

This made me smile =)
Short, sweet and funny. Great work =)

[<3 Simply Rebekah <3]

this is a real sweet poem,
I really liked
and if you haven't already...
I might suggest reading this to you GF :)

[1728]

oh my god wigens all i can do is laugh