many days

hmm many days

it's been many days

i don't write.

it's been many days

i don't sleep.

it's been many days

i really don't sleep.

it's been many days

you are far from me.

it's been many days

you are not mine.

it's been many days

it's been many days

Author's Note

it's been many days
you don't review....

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Many days... yes, sometimes the ideas do not wish to be written down. They just float about in our minds and refuse to congregate into anything worthy of sharing. Who knows the reasons? They are many, no doubt and unique to each person. Failure to sleep is a different problem but again with potentially many reasons. This poems certainly points out those facts in a succinct but rather choppy and terse fashion. I doubt it will thrill most English readers but I could be wrong (probably am). However it does communicate clearly and that's probably its most redeeming feature. Keep at it.

[Robert Strzalko]

The emotion of loss comes through clearly. I enjoyed it.

[gombeggar]

well done and personable

[Amanda]

Nice job