many days

hmm many days

it's been many days

i don't write.

it's been many days

i don't sleep.

it's been many days

i really don't sleep.

it's been many days

you are far from me.

it's been many days

you are not mine.

it's been many days

it's been many days

Author's Note

it's been many days
you don't review....

Reviews

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

For me, just one day of any of this can feel like years. Just a few days can be eternity and a few more can be agony. I think you did a very good job with this one. Thank you for sharing (:

[Mark]

why so many days? That is the question eh? ;0

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! I love that Author's note xD

And the poem. Good work; thanks for sharing it with us!

[Just Kim]

A really well written write, enjoyed the read

[Terohime]

The poem had a deep quality to it. It felt like i was sucked in to the piece. Great job.
~Your friend Res

[de_maruf]

thanks

[Elizabeth Laughlin]

Maybe it has been many days since someone has reviewed, but the cycle obviously ends here. Hahaha! I received a unhappy vibe from this...maybe the narrator (you or someone else?) feels depressed because he/she feels secluded from the surrounding world. With so little available, it's hard to truly analyze. That's the beauty of poetry; nothing is ever clear cut. Nice job expressing your emotions or trying to express someone else's.

[de_maruf]

so thoughtful and you are correct.

[luviva]

nice

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The repetition of this piece really emphasizes the mood of your poem. Great job.

[Calibaster]

Great job, and the repetitive line really brought it home. Great job. :)

[Dayran]

We seek a place in our thoughts that is away from all else, that would point to what we are in our experiences as our will. This takes us away from the social relation and free association of our ideas and thoughts and waits upon the will. Its the dead calm of the sailor.