For me, just one day of any of this can feel like years. Just a few days can be eternity and a few more can be agony. I think you did a very good job with this one. Thank you for sharing (:
Maybe it has been many days since someone has reviewed, but the cycle obviously ends here. Hahaha! I received a unhappy vibe from this...maybe the narrator (you or someone else?) feels depressed because he/she feels secluded from the surrounding world. With so little available, it's hard to truly analyze. That's the beauty of poetry; nothing is ever clear cut. Nice job expressing your emotions or trying to express someone else's.
We seek a place in our thoughts that is away from all else, that would point to what we are in our experiences as our will. This takes us away from the social relation and free association of our ideas and thoughts and waits upon the will. Its the dead calm of the sailor.
i want to cut my life as my desired time
and want to make my time eventful and........................................................................................................................... more..