when you read this you think what it is? is it a poem or writing of a kid? some one get confused some one hesitate to review though it is neither a poem nor a good writing some one should leave here a comment but what and why?
In whimsy I write: It is what I read, both poem and the writing of a kid. Perhaps confused but knowing that some will review because it is baited with red-stained hooks floating upward; with some hesitation and because they're unsure of what they are. "Are we poem or good writing or perhaps neither and why should anyone leave a comment or review when to replay my words would not be new... just literary goo." Adieu! :o)
so many people read without commenting. i chalk it up to two things. they are either lazy or they are visiting non members...it's okay, your friends will review your work, there is a third possibility however, they may be over burdened with read requests and are just skimming your titles to get you off the list..... nice effort!
In whimsy I write: It is what I read, both poem and the writing of a kid. Perhaps confused but knowing that some will review because it is baited with red-stained hooks floating upward; with some hesitation and because they're unsure of what they are. "Are we poem or good writing or perhaps neither and why should anyone leave a comment or review when to replay my words would not be new... just literary goo." Adieu! :o)
i want to cut my life as my desired time
and want to make my time eventful and........................................................................................................................... more..