not a story

I don't think it as a story

A tired man came home from his work.
His 5 year old son was waiting for him at the door.

Son: Dad, may I ask you a question ?
Dad- yeah
Son: Dad, how much you earn in an hour?
Dad: that's not your business.
Son: please tel me.
Dad: 10 $ per hour.
Son: dad, may I please borrow 5 $ ?

Dad got angry and sent his son to his bed.
The little boy went to the room 'n shut the door.

After short time, man got calm 'n
he went to kid's room 'n said
Sorry for being so hard. Here's your 5 $ u asked for.

Kid smiled- ohhh... Thank you so much daddy
Then boy took out some coins he had kept under the pillow,
he counted them 'n said

"Dad, I have 10 $ now.
Can I buy an hour of your time ?
Please come home early tomorrow.
I would like to have dinner with you."

Reviews

[Forever Hidden]

This was truly heartwarming. Tears fell out of my eyes rapidly. Great write :)

[de_maruf]

thanks

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

nice......

[Dayran]

I think kids these days bring a rationality to their responses and administer to their needs this way. Where this is a trend in our societies, fathers are going to run out of excuses.

[Mark]

I think it's a story. Very touching one! good work :)

[gombeggar]

ahh...touched the fatherly side of me...hmm...nicely done and pointedly made

[de_maruf]

hmm
may be

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is perfect. Time with your children is the best time for parent and the child. The poem made the point with a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[de_maruf]

thanx a lot for read

[de_maruf]

what do you think?