grieving

just randomly written

mirror tell my passion
 nature inspire me
air whisper my sadness
cloudy sky grieve for me  
 but why?
am i depressed?????????????

Author's Note

just randomly written

Reviews

[Cerise]

very nicely linked...well i say random words make a much bettr poem than the poem where lots of efforts is put...for a random poem comes directly from heart..:)..nicely done

[de_maruf]

thanks

[Neville]

It may have been randomly written but it was purposefully read & I liked it. All Good Things, Neville

[de_maruf]

some time writing be nice for it's writer and some times for who read it

[Neville]

Absolutely, spot on. N

[Heather]

the different colors and font sizes makes this a bit challenging to read...
Colors however would make me think that you were happy, joyful, instead of depressed..

I liked the opening line mirror tell my passion... perhaps your reflection is telling you more than you are ready to see.