innocent lair

feeling about my ex-girlfriend, at present

take me high
as i never expect ever
make me realize myself
take me higher in clouds

i was not a confident one
never think about me, myself
always avoid the things
that i am not sure about
i pushed myself in study
and get me busy in leisure

make me understand, now
pull me  somewhere, and
there i got myself alone
what told about me
may be right, i think
but i will call her......

a innocent lair

Author's Note

some people blame but i can't

Reviews

[Geraldine]

Oh, I can't blame people either. :)) Nicely written. ^^

[de_maruf]

thanks

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

Nice

[Amanda J. S.]

I liked this poem! I can't really blame people, either... or I can, but I can't be angry at them or hate them for it..

[Raven]

A few grammatical/editing things (that I could be wrong about) such as capitals for 'I' and avoid not avoide.
Wright should be right.

Beautiful presentation of your thoughts.

[de_maruf]

thanks for help

[Raven]

no probs :)

[de_maruf]

i avoid capitalization in my writing

[Raven]

ok. cool. I havent really read your work before being rather new to this site and all, so I didnt realise. Enjoy your artistic license :)

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

A nice write, you're emotion is clear with your nice choice of words

Keep writing

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the tone of the poem. Describing emotion with a logical pen.
"always avoide the things
that i am not sure about"
I did like the ending a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[de_maruf]

thanks for make sense me about these with your writing