demand of soul

demand of soul

A Poem by de_maruf
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i want to be like this, that i want to destroy but want to stay in everyone

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a twilight moon
that i desire to be
start of a neo thing
standing on other destruction

destruction will forget
with anoying ofs
on the other part
the world going on
with giving complement
to the enchanting new moon

© 2012 de_maruf


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A nice read and write. I like the emphasis of the moon as it really is so beautiful and I can see why you yearn for it :)

Keep writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


de_maruf

12 Years Ago

thnx
indeed. very provocative use of words. twilight moon, a very beautiful imagery emphasized here in your poem. thanks for sharing your poem. great piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed your description of a twilight moon. A new moon can give hope and energy to a wise soul. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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de_maruf
de_maruf

dhaka, south, Bangladesh



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