our love

our love

A Poem by hopelessly devoted

To love you means to laugh with you, to talk, and to fight
We are so us when we're both ALWAYS right!
We've been thru hell both together and apart
OUR stories is what connected our hearts
We are one in the same  AND of a different kind
That day i met you, I knew you would be mine
From the first kiss.... to our very LAST,
The distance between shall be our path
The sorrow and joy that we so well know...
All of internally, TOGETHER we'll GROW

This is our test.... SLOWLY we are becoming our best!

© 2012 hopelessly devoted


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our love, oh so true, so powerful, and so intense.
clicking one day step for step, to chaos the next, it makes no sense.
hidden pain, misunderstood thoughts and feelings creating so much pain,
thanks to your love i finally see that inside me has become nothing but thunder and rain.
im a mess, that sure puts it best.
how you have stayed around this long is anyones guess.
i know you may finally be gone,
and that for me life may start to seem very long.
with that said, here are some things i need to say,
as i want to declare on this very day

you burn inside me like a fire that cant be put out.
its a fire that will always grow so please dont ever doubt.
your beauty cant be missed, your heart so big, your eyes so comforting and smile so bright.
never fails to cause me to sore with the clouds as i take flight.
inside is an angel wounded and afraid,
but so amazing that no matter how she is hidden she cant help but take center stage.
your heart so big, so honest, so true.
knowing i broke it leaves me searching for the glue.
i may never be able to repair all the damamge, or pick up all the pieces,
but i swear to you i will spend a lifeting searching and will never take a recess.
your my sweet sweet girl, my best friend, and for most a love in the soul that is seldom found.
a woman seen only in my dreams until that morning i got in the car and you spun my world around.
our path has been one crazy turn to the next and now our future is unkown
distance is unavoidable but no amount can bring this flame down.
it may seem like a huge climb to get back to the top
but together as we learn we will grow, as we grow we will find our spot.
standing tall, standing proud, hand in hand, hearts as one,
our drops of jupiter hasnt died, we simply misplaced it and starting now those days are done.
i have demons with in me that have tore me apart tearing you apart.
i wont rest until i find the glue, and repair each and every piece of your heart.
i accept this challenge and will pass this test,
with time and patients i will kill these demons and will once again be at my very best.
this time there is no fight,
as my dear YOU ARE RIGHT!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 15, 2012
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