Can't You Hear

You say that I'm worthless

Not worth you precious time

Obscuring your ^{red hazed} vision

Now I'm _drawing the line

If I'm such a nusaince

Why is your hand in mine?

If I'm so sorry

Why are you on your knees?

Begging for forgivess?

Oh, Pu-lease!

So now your sorry?

Please, you make me ^laugh

I can see _{right through}

Your bloodstained mask

^{I'm slipping off the edge}

On the line between anger and rage

Go ahead on your merry way

Your w***e rampage

Worthless behind my back

The world when I'm near

There's nothing you have to say

That i could bear to hear

Get off your knees

Stop cowering in fear

Now its over

Can't you hear?

 

Author's Note

okay this is like totally the opposite of the poem i just wrote...

Reviews

[Misa]

this is an incredibly interesting write - the switchin colors, and use of strikeouts, made for a technologically advanced poem; each line has something new to offer, some new play or twist on words. loved the message of strength, and the personality you convey - did notice that "your" should be "you're" though, in "So now your sorry?"
other than that, quite nicely done.
oh, one thing l did notice though
"Worthless behind my back
The world when I'm near" - in the beginning the narrator was the one that was worthless, then here you switched to the accused being worthless. interesting switch>
~Misa