Redemption

That certain feeling.

Stumbling down from mountains,

landing on the cold snow,

ruining its beautiful white color,

I fill with my own color of red

Death rises from my veins yet

yonder the sun with its rays

With every strength I have,

I reach to feel the wind of freedom

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

Gorgeous, short but stunning and vibrant, the vivid imagery causes a dancing of colours to occur within the melody of words you weave, a darkening and haunting story parallels such weighted words of beauty hope and yet defeat.