Sensual Silence

Sensual silence, sultry and sweet

Grant me reprieve from chaos and sound

Into my bower join my retreat

Velvety softness absorbs all around

 

Cacophony calmed creation confined

Passion conceived with you on my mind

Silence in tandem love redefined

Rewarded with peace when sound we do bind

 

Silence so sensual, silence surreal

Sweetly I crave sensations to feel

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

The goal of every boatswains' mate at the carnival rides. A tall glass of sensual silence, sipped slowly... what a wonderful picture you detail, M.. So fully in mesh with your stated background too. One can muster little surprise at the probable inspiration for this piece! :)

Well done.

[M. Kari]

Thank you very much so delighted that you chose to read from my offerings ♥

[Tattered Teddy]

I love it. How often we do crave just a moment of peace, of nothingness. Of silence, sensual as it can be.

[M. Kari]

ah mmm yes right now especially I just got rid of nine people all in my bedroom...sure it is a joy to have family who wants to be near me...as i try to hide in my room...but having them leave offers it's own sweet joy ♥

[Tattered Teddy]

Nine people??? WOW that tis a huge family! Aye I grew up in a large family, no privacy, and to this day I do relish the peace and silence when I am alone in my flat.

[M. Kari]

Haha yes they do not usually all come to my room at the same time but each had a reason to be there but it became quite chaotic there for a bit...even our house guest was here in my room haha

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem especially the last two lines.

[M. Kari]

thank you yes silence sings to me

[Sami Khalil]

Me too. You are welcome.

[Angel Bird]

Rhythm, meter and rhyme are very good here in this wonderful little poem.

---Rewarded with peace when sound we do bind

Great wording and work.