Rant

Rant

A Poem by M. Kari
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frustrations explored

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corrosive thoughts simmer stoically

threatening to bubble caustically

I hate...I despise and feel distressed

not fair I scream with unrest

oh that I could I'd bang and destroy

                         something

I don't know what....

 

storms brew and cycle through 

still...there's calm moments too

 

when I'm not caught

in endless torture, chaos or despair

 

I hate, oh how I hate and wish 

How I wish 

there was someone who really did care...

© 2012 M. Kari


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I completely relate to this! Although I assure you, someone really does care. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. Kari

12 Years Ago

Thank you it helps to know others do care
Tattered Teddy

12 Years Ago

I know it does, thank God for those who care!
A moving, song of despair. This poem made its way to the page, because it had to.
Well done M.K.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. Kari

12 Years Ago

Yes I was under quite a bit of despair when I wrote that...thankfully such moments are rare :)

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I love to read and i love to write. I have six novels written in need of good critiques and much editing. I am the mother of eight children and grandma of four. I am a homemaker first and also .. more..

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