Nostalgia

Nostalgia

A Poem by Lyss
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From the last time we drove in his car. I miss you, dad.

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Wet pavement and greasy pizza

Blurred lights through a fogged window

Words caged behind teeth

Potholes and speed bumps

crackling radio

Rain rain rain

© 2017 Lyss


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Lyss
I know I'm a bit rusty, don't hold back with the criticism.

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I have no criticism. I like the way you write with a simple style that displays feelings behind the words I can picture and relate to.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on June 13, 2017
Last Updated on June 13, 2017
Tags: nostalgia, car, dad, rain, pizza

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Lyss
Lyss

chicago, IL



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