questions in his mind

 

 

I lay here thinking of your questions, and thoughts

how could You not know of what...

would it be like

for me looking at flowers on the streets of New York

at the one of many open store fronts

crowded in enjoyment

sipping my favorite morning java

being carried away in steamy thoughts of you

Waiting, my love for you to find me

openly...

Destined for promise

you Walking with the crowd

but the nearing

of my presence slows your pace

questioning... the energy that turns and moves you with a

feeling-seen in your eyes, knowing that you will soon see my face

only being lead by a dream that holds my spirit

you are lead off course to touch

Running toward the unknown, but welcoming warmth

...solace,

that confuses your mind

like a gust of wind from out of nowhere

she has to be here

you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck

after gently pushing my hair aside

Yes, you smell me in my mind

intensity of happenstance

lets you know

It's me

wearing that hat...almost not breathing anymore,

making everything a blur, you

run and put your arms

around my waist without ever seeing my face

and taste my neck with a kiss...I know it is you because

our hearts begin to beat rhythmically,

and like a great crescendo... start to pound like kettle drums
 

One second feels like a life time, with you.

Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation.
Hugs meshing souls with all
 

questions...

finally answered.

 

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

Amazing!, Beautifully written and expressed in a manner of fine taste,
I should not say this here...lol
My favorite part of a woman is her neck...lol

you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mind
intensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me

This knocked me out of my chair.

Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful poem.

Art

[Honeypot]

Loved the stle of this poem. Its got an urban, modern feel to it and I thought these lines were especially wonderful:

"Yes, you smell me in my mind intensity of happen stance lets you know It's me"

They speak volumes. Great poem.

[PoetryNmotion]

when I first read this all I could say was WOW! what a beautiful peice, Poetry in its finest form.
A great write

[BABSIE BEE]

Loved this. Very refreshing for the soul. A nice light n airey poem with a free spirited feel to it. The question answered....mmmmm ??? !!!
Thanks
Babsie Bee xxx

[lovelyangel09]

I like your unique style of writing. Its a beautiful write!

[Kelley]

I loved the lines "One second feels like a life time, with you.
Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation."

Very romantic and I can see the passion in your writing.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Masq]

"she has to be here
you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck
after gently pushing my hair aside
Yes, you smell me in my mindintensity of happenstance
lets you know
It's me"

The hopeless romantic in me was glued to every line. Outstanding imagery!....I saw everthing unfolding in my minds eye. This piece was a true joy to read. Excellent write!

[Jolyrose]

Okay, I didn't breath for a minute. I feel like there are so many interpretations. I feel soul mates finding each other randonly. So beautiful and full of clear images. Love this one.

[MagiCrystal]

One second feels like a life time, with you.
Kissing, and crying with an ocean floor of anticipation.
Hugs meshing souls with all

questions...
finally answered.


Love these lines...your words and your mind..This is passion and desire.. felt all over my body! Merci
Magical.. and Crystalline... Love it.. Muah 100 % Pure love.. awwwwwwwwwww

[Amant Cache]

Oh my god. Woman. I wish I could write like you. I know that feeling. You captured it so well. And this line:

"you have daydreamed the fragrance from my neck"

My Gods help me. I felt it. And wanted to smell it. Does that make sense. You wild, mad woman poet!

[Cathy .W.]

This piece is very beautiful. It has so much imagery and emotion in it. Its funny when you can relate to a piece and its like everything you want to say. So WOW!!!! is all I can say.
-Cathy