Sunday Morning

You stared

me awake

with your desire to touch and taste

my sweetness.

Shaken by a mental moan from with-In

a deep rest

and loving state

of mind

as I lay. You stared me

awake            

with your strong will

not

to touch and to feel

my skin as it peeked

through the sheets. You stared

me awake. To turn

and look into your

eyes and see

a want

for a place to crawl inside

and hide. You stared

me awake and now

we can both feel,

and be filled

with

each other’s mental

moans.

 

 

Reviews

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

Nothing amazes me more than hearing or in this case reading a woman's thoughts.
Nice choice of words and the progression was alluring.

Being that you are a virtuous woman no matter what ideas your mind conjures they will always be interpreted for what they are... Beautiful, pure, insightful, edifying and pleasant once received.
This poem shows the difference between a virtuous woman and a woman without virtue.
In that you were able to depict something seductive with vivid imagery and it couldn't be looked at as raunchy because virtue allowed it to be elegantly written and still arousing.

Another excellent write!

[Dalaina Renee]

The title caught my eye. And the poem is a lovley as the title! I enjoyed reading this piece!

[The DuchessPoet]

Girl, girl, girl you said it all! --- "You stared
me awake
with your desire to touch and taste""

" I'm speechless and spellbound...
Your ability to express passion is dynamic...
I absolutely LOVE this piece!

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

mental stimulation. I like it.

D

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A beautiful write of the love that can exist when handled with care. Well done

[just is]

such a soft and beautiful write here, like this alot

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

Seductive and poignant.......beautiful flow.........emotional flirtation........all of these beautiful thoughts come to mind as I read this outstanding piece......Well done my friend.....

Peace,

Bill :-)

[Tonya]

Wow! What a very soft passionate tone released in this piece. Very loving. It really opens up the soft side of women and our emotions. I really liked this poem.

Oh, and thanks for the chicken!

[Alford G. Harris]

Very beautiful. Loved it.

[~The Queen~]

Very good. It's very open but conserved al well. I liked it! Keep it up!

-QueenofKings

P.S Could you do me a favour and just read over my prologue for me? I want to see if I can get people hooked like I am. Lol. Thank you! have a wonderful day!

[Samuel Dickens]

ssss. That's hot. Someone hand me the oven mitts. It's also sensuous and beautiful. Much water has flowed under the bridge since I experienced such a thing, but how could I forget?