You know...

Timing is not off when you cannot have what you want, when you want it. God is growing you up so that when he gives it to you, you are ready.

You know...
often you make me Feel uneasy
I Feel confused Feeling your words in such a way
my stomach turns, my heart pounds
and those calming, and sexy sounds...Why
do your words take me to a different place,
a place where I am happy to be...me?
I laugh, love, and share myself totally
 uncovered for you
to do
anything, and everything
to me
I understand it is not the time
and it is not right...
okay baby come on again,
do me, Please
with your words
not tonight...Again
it is not for now...So why
my love and how
 do I long for what happens when we go there into
that light...? Where it is just us two
That makes me have a sense of urgency filled
with patience to bask in your glory...us
words
Listening to you, saved Me!
you were His vessel...for me
I came crawling out of that hole
...floating on air
that comforted my soul
it came through you... my love 
that night I was filled with despair
that Light shined through you
saying you cared. I mirrored an image,

now of colors...
So how did it get twisted, and misunderstood
leaving me here missing you, your words
that sweet air, and Light from you onto me?
Questioning
myself, and my emptiness,
 with a longing
for what I felt was so right...guess I was wrong.
You know...
 

 

Reviews

[Treasure]

Girl You are truly gifted and I enjoyed this piece. It alomost reminds me of the countless times I was so caught up that in emotion and need that I thought something to be God sent. I realize that everything is allowed though so maybe those times were just to assure me that one day the TRUTH would happen to me, and it finally has.
You are very gifted. Peace

[Angel's Lady]

oh, how very beautiful....longing, yearning...dang. Oh to love and to feel loved.
Great write, dear one.

[Ocean Orchid]

Such a beautiful piece of great poetic feelings .... only I can say keep up the great work - writing !

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

The way you write is simply astonishing!
I love the way you place yourself between each line and how your words effortlessly hold so much weight.
You are a magnificent writer and a masterful storyteller, the manner in which you consistently provide your readers with such beautifully passionate, fanciful, thought-provoking, avant-garde mental sketches is worthy of a standing ovation!!!

A perfect write!

your biggest fan,

Marvin Lewis

[Alford G. Harris]

It is beautiful how you can pour the passions of the heart out so eloquently.

[THE LOST ROSE]

You have capture a moment in your life that you are able to share with your many fans. Who are you really? Why did GOD dump so much talent on you. This piece is great and an amazing write. I am glad this part of you, you will continue to share, inspire and make me dream that I am part of you. Every time I read this piece it get better and deeper. Keep writing and I will keep reading.

[BEEGE]

This was da ish!!
U never fail to amaze me
with the words and thoughts
you bless pages with.
Good write!

BeegE

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes when we think we have what we want it disappears and we are left to wonder why but like it is said you can't always get what you want but if you try you'll get what you need, many times a loss leads us to unanswered prayers... a powerful emotional and gifted write.